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Will You Be Mine Please

... this poem needs a little something... That's way more to me then nothing it needs empathy from you to me because you need to see everything i go through just to see you but i would do so much more to make you come through that door and say yes and worry me less because i'm crazy for you baby and maybe,just maybe you mite feel that way to and the put yourself in my shoes just so that you can see how much it would mean to me if you said yes and cut out all this mess so i want you to answer honestly to me could you actually see how much i want to be with you so don't deny me and make me boo just say yes and then ill bless all the things that made you say it and maybe for just a bit we can just sit under the stars hand in hand looking for mars and all those stars would shine so.... will you be mine?

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Date: 3/23/2011 7:43:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Brody. May you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2011 7:04:00 PM
This read like song lyrics....very nice...
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