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Will You Accept Me

I have flaws I have scars I'm not a model Will you accept me? When I'm in pain will you shield me Society label an individual by they issue will you? Will you abuse me Lie to me Be ashamed of me Will you take me dancing in your arms Proudly will you leave me when the tough gets going Will love me despite my condition Will you accept me

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Chrispen Mukumbi

Date: 11/15/2016 5:27:00 AM

Yeeeeeeeeeeees !! I will accept you. What a gem Pat. I love it.

Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 11/15/2016 6:40:00 AM

Thank you Chrispen Mukumbi.... You made my morning you just don't know it thank you so much love....

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/2/2016 9:10:00 PM

When you have the time stop by page:-) Alexis PS, Read my poem"I thought you hung the stars

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/2/2016 9:09:00 PM

Hi Patrice, WoW!It's seems as though you can read my mind. Although I feel that I am a survivor (I was abused as a child)and no longer see myself as a victim. From time to time this poem is the anthem of my life. You caputured the feeling of a abused person very well. I see that you are new to the soup. Let me the first to welcome you to poetry soup. This is a place where you can learn from other poets like yourself. It's also a place to make new friends.

Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 11/2/2016 11:30:00 PM

Thank you so much I feel so humble to receive a response as this amazing. Like they say when life give you lemons you make lemonade and have faith. Thank you once again Alexis for making me feel welcome... Much love P.S. Dream big in believe in it when no one else does it surely will pay off.