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Feb.29.2024

Redamancy Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Suzette Richards

"The throb of my heart Will you love me forever, with all my frailty and flaws?" "My Darling, why doubt? You entered my heart unasked, like a thief never to leave."

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/2/2024 12:55:00 PM

A lovely write...we all feel vulnerable with our frailty and flaws. Blessings, dear one!

Bill Baker

Date: 3/1/2024 5:49:00 PM

Sweet love Sedoka, Valsa. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/1/2024 5:40:00 AM

Ahhh!! Nice one for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/29/2024 8:42:00 PM

I enjoyed your poem The message is clear. Love gone awry, but maybe not.

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 2/29/2024 5:02:00 PM

Very nicely done Valsa!

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/29/2024 12:56:00 PM

Your poem beautifully delves into the profound resilience of love, dear Valsa, even in the face of our inherent flaws as humans. The tender interaction between two lovers resonates deeply, encapsulating the very core of unwavering dedication and unconditional affection. A truly passionate piece of poetry! Best of luck in the contest!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/29/2024 12:41:00 PM

I really like how you did this. I hope it makes her list.

Jay Narain

Date: 2/29/2024 9:58:00 AM

Nice love poem. Nice and short.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/29/2024 6:37:00 AM

"Will You" is a lovely write with a wonderful ending. "Good Luck" Have a blessed/great day...............

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/29/2024 4:42:00 AM

Dear Valsa, Your poem is a poignant exploration of love's enduring strength despite human imperfections. The tender exchange between the lovers are felt deeply, capturing the essence of unconditional love and unwavering commitment. Your words evoke a sense of vulnerability and beauty, reminding me of the profound bond shared between two souls. This is a heartfelt piece that touches the core of emotion. - Blessings, Daniel

Karen Jones

Date: 2/29/2024 1:33:00 AM

Passionate poem! Good luck in the contest!