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Will the Sun Ever Show

Inside my mind is like the pitch black darkness of night I can never really see clearly what's wrong from right The happier times of long ago are now far from sight Will the sun ever show? Will I see the light? Lies become truth and pretending becomes real As years away from you time does steal Another cold hearted hand life does deal Will the sun ever show? Will the warmth I feel? With nothing but worry in your path to lay And no words of encouragement do others say More confused you become day after day Will the sun ever show? Will it guide my way? Will the sun ever show? Will it be today © Donna Jones

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/11/2013 11:20:00 AM

- Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage "Featured Poem of the Week" - Have a nice day,Donna. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/11/2013 7:17:00 AM

Hello Donna, , '''CONGRATULATIONS''' On your featured poem of the week... Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... -XOX- Love Linda

April Gabriella

Date: 8/5/2013 9:10:00 PM

"Lies become truth and pretending becomes real" I live these words. I know their truth. I love the whole 2nd stanza in fact. This is such a great write.

Malcolm Varner

Date: 8/5/2013 6:14:00 PM

I hope you find your sunshine, and I hope that it embraces you in warmth. Cheers!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/21/2013 4:25:00 PM

Dear Donna, this is extreemly well written. You write like YOU know "what's Wrong from right" and if YOU look at the comments below (which You've done with YOUR Replies') How can YOU hear "And no words of encouragement do others say" I encourage YOU because YOU Inspire me. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Donna Jones
Date: 3/21/2013 5:07:00 PM

Thanks Harry...somedays you must look for the sun as you well know...:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/23/2013 2:56:00 AM

Donna, I hope the sun will shine on you - that everything will turn around and go the right way. - You have written a touching and very good poem, I like it very much. - Welcome to P-Soup, I hope you will get much pleasure to share your thoughts and poems here with us. - Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - You will always be welcome back. - I wish you good luck with your poem and the "sun" - oxox / / Your new friend from Norway Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones
Date: 1/23/2013 9:47:00 AM

Thanks and its amazing to have friends around the world when you are from nowhere oklahoma