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Will Anybody Miss Me

The world around me starts to turn into a tunnel Reducing the space in which my thoughts would once dwell Fleeting visions, of my life gone by, fill my sight As I drift towards the beckoning light Above my body, I see myself rise The world becomes small as my soul flies Through beautiful clouds, through beautiful skies Is this how it is when one dies? I see people gather around my mortal remains Speaking in muffled tones, is that pain That is reflected in their muted voice Or are they simply paying me lip service In a few hours I see the people disperse Going about their lives' mundane pleasures I am dead and gone, so I guess nobody needs me I wonder, after today, will anybody miss me

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Afolabi Muideen

Date: 10/8/2017 1:53:00 AM

Of course, a poet does not die, though not in the world of living. But a poet exists through his write. You will always be missed, generation after generations.

Manoj Kumar
Date: 10/20/2017 5:22:00 AM

I took time to think of apt words to respond to your comment. Believe me, I am humbled by your words . All I can do is express my heartfelt gratitude in taking time out to read my poem and for the inspiring comment of yours. Thank you so much. God bless

Anu Nayak

Date: 10/4/2017 4:19:00 AM

Dear Manoj, A very emotive write.....there will always be a few who will miss us when we leave this world.....though the feel might slowly fade away with moving time....i liked this write dear....you have picturised your poem so well ...with your words such that reader gets an image while reading .... Keep writing....!!!!!, love, Anu:)

Manoj Kumar
Date: 10/4/2017 11:12:00 PM

Thanks Anu:)

Becca Teagan

Date: 10/4/2017 12:24:00 AM

I think we all wonder this, at some point in our lives. It's kind of hard to think about. You've expressed this well.

Manoj Kumar
Date: 10/4/2017 11:12:00 PM

Thanks Becca

Silent One

Date: 10/3/2017 5:50:00 AM

Someone will always miss you.. A deep and emotive write..

Manoj Kumar
Date: 10/4/2017 12:11:00 AM

Thank you :)