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Wildmoor Heath Boardwalk Crossing

SLOW MOVEMENT Move out from tall trees - to wider scene now Tympanic rhythm - andante theme As footsteps beat on - path of the Ash beam In diverse prospect - wet levels gleam Look to the surface - life is reflected Now mirrors brightening - skies cerulean See over there the - new view surveyed now Past tawny grasses - strewn by wind laid Birch saplings dapple - hazel and apple Amber the dry fern - dashed now with jade Where silver stems - surround sun-bright vale there Small stream descends in - glistening cascade Over above In - slow closing distance Land rises to - overlook languid fen Our destination - draws our steps on to Reach barrow slopes - fields of wider ken So measured pace continues ‘til then While spirit moves to hilltop ascend

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Date: 10/11/2020 11:37:00 AM
Greg: I really enjoyed reading this one. I love boardwalks over marshes - our souls do get into a rythm with our footsteps.....our nomadic spirits so to speak. The aboriginals tracked their journeys in songlines. Music of the spheres and such. Sending good wishes. SuZ
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Date: 9/5/2020 8:18:00 AM
Really exquisite poetry. Our goal that of the transformation of ourselves and our earth to a kingdom of light. During our evolution too often reason is obscured by the canopy of our dense nature, so shaded it becomes difficult to see a lighted path richly blessed with graces. Your writing and sense gives me hope. Love it!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 9/5/2020 8:40:00 AM
Thank you so much for your generous response, Joe. I am very grateful.
Date: 8/30/2020 11:14:00 AM
This is quite brilliant Geoffrey. I don't pretend to know classical music too well but your poem encouraged me to dig deeper. Beethoven, by all accounts, described his 7th as his"most excellent symphony." Well, yours is a 'most excellent' piece. You have obviously put your heart and soul into this and it makes for great reading. I'm a year in to Poetry Soup and feel I have only scratched the surface. I've dug deeper and found poets like yourself who deserve so much more attention. Brilliant!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/30/2020 2:16:00 PM
Many thanks for your very kind comments, Gary. You have made my day.

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