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Wilderness of the Mind

Disorientated in the world I've known. Struggling to comprehend what's defined. Unable to fix my course, I'm alone. I stumble through my encamped darkness blind. Encircled by confusion I must stand, To confront the reasons that find me lost, And reach for the will my soul shall demand, To defeat this fluster, to pay its cost. My depth of will begins to marbleize, As I dissolve fear of failure away. Before me a challenge I won't disguise . The tensile strength of my will on display Confused in the wilderness of the mind, To temper the lost soul, to realign

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/7/2016 8:08:00 AM
Excellent write my friend, a well deserving poem to place in the Lost contest Congratulations!
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Date: 2/7/2016 12:33:00 AM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my Lost contest, with this great Sonnet ~
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/7/2016 3:14:00 PM
Thank you Broken Wings
Date: 2/6/2016 7:10:00 PM
A great insight into the fear of failure Frederic. Congratulations on your placement. I give this a #7
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Date: 2/6/2016 4:43:00 PM
Frederic, Congrats on your lovely "LOST" win. LINDA
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Date: 2/5/2016 1:19:00 PM
I admire the eloquence of your expressions--flowing, stimulating like this solid poem!
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Date: 2/4/2016 1:06:00 PM
a refreshing transformation with lovely metaphors, frederick.. you will never be lost!..huggs
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Date: 2/4/2016 12:54:00 PM
- Lovely and touching written, Frederic - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/4/2016 11:07:00 AM
I like it! Good luck in the contest! Peace and blessings my friend.
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