Wild Winds

will he be lost to the wild winds or just to me by Gail

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Gail Foster

Date: 11/17/2015 7:17:00 AM

Thank you for that, Lin. I did wonder if it should be longer, but decided in the end that this was all that needed to be said. Best wishes to you x

Lin Lane

Date: 11/17/2015 7:13:00 AM

Sometimes the cliché 'less is more,' is the best way to go...In the case of your rhyme, it definitely is.

John Fleming

Date: 11/15/2015 2:15:00 PM

An intriguing little muse, Gail. Cleverly conceived and nicely expressed. My best regards! :) john

Gail Foster
Date: 11/17/2015 3:52:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely comment, John. My poems are usually longer but this expresses much in few words. Maybe I will write a poem with the answer one day. All the best to you.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/15/2015 11:03:00 AM

What an intriguing question, Gail. One's left to wonder about the sentiments behind the lines. Thanks ever so much for your gracious comment on my poem. Blessings.

Gail Foster
Date: 11/17/2015 3:58:00 AM

Thank you so much, Eileen. It's a long story to tell in twelve words. So many things are a mystery, and the greatest mystery of all is love. All good things to you x