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Wild Thing

The wild rose expresses the essence of life and beauty a sweet blossom atop thorny stems with roots entirely her own the fragrant lure summons as honey bee makes its approach

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Cherie Durbin

Date: 3/28/2011 8:44:00 AM

I can see the honey bee swooping in, Edwin!

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/22/2011 3:13:00 PM

This is a beauty. Good luck in the contest, Edwin. Always, Annalise

Jack Horne

Date: 3/22/2011 11:50:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Edwin - and thanks for your kind words : ) Jack

James Fraser

Date: 3/22/2011 11:21:00 AM

Nice one Edwin, fine Sijo.....:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2011 2:38:00 PM

I love how you said "with roots entirely her own" This is sweet as honey!

Kash Poet

Date: 3/20/2011 12:25:00 PM

Excellent write here Edwin!Goodluck if for contest.Thanks for your kind comment at my page--kash

Rick Parise

Date: 3/18/2011 3:22:00 PM

This is simply beautiful~SOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/18/2011 1:07:00 PM

Beautiful imagery and analogy, Edwin

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/18/2011 10:52:00 AM

Magical sijo, Edwin. As they say, "every rose has its thorns." We have to approach beauty with caution for fear of getting hurt. Best wishes in the sijo contest! Carolyn