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Furious wind from the north hisses louder, banging against the gaped mouth of a sky, drenched… Haggard, the night wheezes with quack of birds waylaid; a time of unruly rainfall crashing once more: and the moon grows bald, groaning a jumble of cracked acoustics: On and on, the roar of sleet pierces through lush trees in a noise that grates far into the dark horizon, an energy fierce like a woman scorned. How she blares a war amidst a company of men, flowers, and all in one driven ride that her wild thrill rasps zooms --- until on ninth hour a slow-motion of rhythm flows, while she pauses to croon a mellow tune as if... in final taps of a wail, nothing ever happened. For Shadow Hamilton:The Noise Contest Written 3/9/2017

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Date: 4/2/2017 5:21:00 PM
Amazing imagery, and a phraseology that is distinctly you. So well done!
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Date: 3/19/2017 2:56:00 PM
I love the different images you have for the wind and noises and how you bring it to subsiding at the end. Well penned. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/19/2017 8:40:00 AM
Well done Nette. Congratulations...
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Date: 3/19/2017 3:17:00 AM
Beautiful Nette nice to see you congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 3/17/2017 4:11:00 PM
As "0nly" Nette Onclaud could say it! Simply Marvelous!
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Date: 3/11/2017 9:58:00 PM
Wow...what a fierce event! This poem has everything that ignites emotions, right from the start... Weather, high drama, intensity, and as close to 'sound effects' as I have ever encountered while...reading..whew :-) Superb writing skills, this is fantastic nette :-) It's such a treat to read such magnificent writing. A fave, 7++++ many blessings to you :-) lynn
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Date: 3/11/2017 1:55:00 AM
Excellent use of imagery and personification, Nette! While reading I felt like I was caught in this same storm, but luckily not in the clutches of a scorned woman! #7+ Hugs // paul
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Date: 3/10/2017 11:26:00 PM
Wow! Wonderful imigary Good luck in the contest hugs Eve~*
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Date: 3/9/2017 8:28:00 PM
Wow...you really show the strength of the storm, Nette....like a woman scorned. Amazing imagery throughout this piece. Hugs
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Date: 3/9/2017 2:34:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/9/2017 11:50:00 AM
Amazing build-up of sound from crashing, banging to wheezing excellently realized! Faving this sterling poem.
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Date: 3/9/2017 10:41:00 AM
I was in that storm while reading this gem.. Aptly descriptive image of my first wife , those verses are. She only marred by her drug addiction.. A fav, a true whale of a poem my friend..
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Date: 3/9/2017 9:57:00 AM
a storm captured in poetic verse..really well done..good luck
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Date: 3/9/2017 9:08:00 AM
Beautiful Nette, your poetry is something I happy get lost in every time I read. Good luck in the contest.
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