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Wild Iris

Gently lapping shore Wild Iris leans close to drink Taffy made you smile © All Rights Reserved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/21/2010 5:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" James. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2010 9:12:00 PM
This poem made me smile as I thought of the times when I've seen those iris plants near the water. Congrats on your win! Dan C
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Date: 6/19/2010 5:01:00 PM
Congratulatons on your win with this sweetie!
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Date: 6/18/2010 4:56:00 AM
thecutting line is sooooooooooo good! Light & love (you have 2 focuses lake & flower)
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Date: 6/16/2010 8:54:00 PM
Congrats Jimbo on your success in my contest with this wonderful write.. appreciate your support of my contest.. with luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/15/2010 4:31:00 AM
This is a beautiful Senryu, James! Great writing..Kisses, Emily
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Date: 6/14/2010 9:25:00 AM
Ah, summer! The flowers are always so lovely. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/14/2010 5:39:00 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned...Good luck in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/13/2010 5:58:00 PM
This is really sweet, James--I especially liked that line about the taffy :) hope it didn't soften too quickly--nikko :)
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Date: 6/13/2010 3:42:00 PM
Oh this is too fun! Loved you Senryu poem.
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Date: 6/13/2010 12:14:00 PM
this is a great entry for contest jim loved the imagery in this one want to stand that flower upright right through the imagery thanks for sharign keep up the great writing
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Date: 6/13/2010 4:09:00 AM
A wonderful haiku on summer with nice images
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Date: 6/12/2010 9:42:00 PM
this is summery SWEET! Luv, Andrea
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