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Wild Butterfly

butterfly swoops low landing on my watchful gaze red in nightfall's float ...I wing my last moonlight dream but then it flies in a rush Tanka Written With Decent Pivot Contest Sponsor: Chris D Aechtner by: nette onclaud

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/14/2012 4:19:00 AM

Big congrats from Spain xx

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/13/2012 10:12:00 PM

Lovely flowing tanka, well done Lee

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/12/2012 11:51:00 PM

great Tanka Friend Nette :) Congratulations!! :)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/12/2012 10:51:00 AM

Oh yeah! This is grand!! Congrats, Nette!

Kash Poet

Date: 10/12/2012 7:55:00 AM

Hey Nette Congrats on your Win with this beautiful Tanka.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/12/2012 5:25:00 AM

Missed my calling...should have been a psychic...predicted this a sure winner...great job and congratulations, Nette! - Tim

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 10/12/2012 3:34:00 AM

Congrats on your win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2012 12:21:00 AM

Another awesome one from you and big congrats for your win. Luv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan

Date: 10/11/2012 11:11:00 PM

Beautiful Nette, Many congrats on this win.

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 10/11/2012 11:02:00 PM

This is lovely Nette! Love the image of the butterfly. Congrats on your win!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/11/2012 4:14:00 PM

Always mysterious! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/11/2012 12:42:00 PM

A well earned congratulations on your win in Susan's "Single Tanka" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/7/2012 4:59:00 PM

Would love to have seen that butterfly,and in the moonlight no less!... What a great description, Nette...I continue in to be in awe of your talent! - Tim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/7/2012 4:05:00 PM

Don't think that I have ever seen a red butterfly here..I would think that it is a beauty...Enjoyed reading your creative work..Yes, my poem about the hunter's bullet shot was spiritually based..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 10/7/2012 12:27:00 PM

wow, this is just beautiful, Nette. Congrats on your wins : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/7/2012 11:55:00 AM

VERY lovely, Nette. AS always!! Is it for the seasonal contest?

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/7/2012 11:26:00 AM

Wow, the beauty of your write is phenomenal my friend! I truly love each and every word of this incredible poem Nette! I really enjoyed this delightful butterfly flying about showing its gorgeousness and displaying its graceful flight in the moonlight! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!