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Wicked Dream

Eyes like ice Pierce my soul You make me whole You are my greatest vice Voice of poison The sweetest taste of candy Gets me drunk like a bottle of Brandy My thoughts are frozen Deeply and madly in love with a wicked dream You reach the darkest corners of my mind Something I never thought I could find You make me feel serene If you leave I’ll truly go insane You fulfill my every question and deepest wonder Soft as a mouse and loud as thunder So what if I love the pain?

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2015 11:20:00 PM

Carolie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 5/30/2015 11:53:00 AM

Carolie, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Viv Wigley

Date: 5/30/2015 12:24:00 AM

This sounds like a guilty pleasure, Carolie. Good write. Welcome to Poetry Soup, with a bunch of thoroughly charming folk residing here. Oh, and me, too. Hope you enjoy your time here. Viv x