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Why So Straight, My Friend

A straight line, laity, And crooked one quite weighty, In topsy-turvy A poetic metre’s world, Friend, why be such a straight bird? And why so long winding Where a crooked line softness shows, One straight, harshness and stress, In world of woes, oh warped that goes, Where a crooked line softness shows— In such an awkward world of woes, What use straightforwardness Where a crooked line softness shows, One straight, harshness and stress! ___________________________________ Triolet |12.07.2023| poetry, world Poet’s note: What Tanka takes five short and sweet lines, a Triolet takes eight and longer ones.

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Date: 7/30/2023 12:03:00 AM
Aniruddha, Very nice to find this one. Softness carries the day in a curvy, stress free Triolet. -Richard
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