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Why So Sad

Why So Sad? Why do you look lonely, Bereft and so, so sad? Has someone been quite nasty? Have you been really bad? What lies beyond your haunted eyes, Your melancholy stare? Do you want to tell me what it is? Do you want to take me there? Your doleful gaze cements your face, Your shoulders hanging low. Do you want to tell me what it is? Or would you prefer that I go? I stand transfixed, absorbing your pain, My breath is quick and light. Do you want to tell me what it is? What causes your terrible plight? What demons grasp your very soul? Why do they steal your smile? Do you want to tell me what it is? This cruel and evil bile. Can you see through your vacant gaze? Do you know that I am here? Do you want to tell me what it is? And explain what monsters are near? What has sucked the life from you? Who have you become? Do you want to tell me what it is? What nefarious deed has been done?

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Date: 1/30/2016 12:10:00 PM
GAYNOR, A great pleasure to find and read your pen today. Love -- SKAT --
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Date: 8/25/2013 9:41:00 PM
NICE 1
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Date: 8/24/2013 11:27:00 PM
I really like this. I love the rhyme and the meter and tone were excellent! Great work!
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Date: 8/24/2013 8:34:00 PM
Hi Gaynor, I very much enjoyed this brilliant piece, , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/24/2013 4:35:00 PM
I watched the movie Nefarious 3 days ago. Thanks for the insights Gaynor, Your first poem on the soup is excellent and fun for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat
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Date: 8/24/2013 1:58:00 PM
Welcome to P-Soup, Gaynor! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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