Why Not

Who is the well known visitor forgetting What a scandalous bit of gossip it would be? Where privacy is not always very private When the unscrupulous are so quick to see Why not some filthy lucre just for me? For Harry's contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2012 10:56:00 AM

Joyce, congrats;-) In Harry's fun fun... 5 w's contest. I think this was a fun contest.. Take care.. always~PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2012 8:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Harry's "5W's" contest Joyce. Sorry to be late commenting. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/29/2012 4:21:00 PM

Wow, that last question is great! A belated congrats on a wonderful win, Joyce! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2012 8:44:00 PM

Congrats on the HM, Joyce. your poem was great!

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/27/2012 3:13:00 PM

Joyce, this is a great poem. Interesting how people are so willing to believe gossip but less apt to believe the truth. Well done. Lee

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/27/2012 9:19:00 AM

Thought provoking this is! A little gem!!

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/27/2012 9:17:00 AM

Congrats on your Honorable Mention, Joyce! Love, Kim

Len Gasun

Date: 8/27/2012 8:51:00 AM

wow!!! a brilliant idea. i love it especially the surprise ending, lol. MY WARMEST CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN, JOYCE ! HUGS, leonora

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/27/2012 7:14:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win Joyce xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/27/2012 6:06:00 AM

congrats on your H/M Joyce, thanks for entering my contest.

Jack Horne

Date: 8/26/2012 12:34:00 PM

Love this witty write, Joyce. Had a chuckle at your Jack the Ripper comment, lol. Many congrats on your wins : )

Kash Poet

Date: 8/22/2012 7:20:00 PM

Very nicely done Joyce.Best wishes to you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2012 5:51:00 PM

Hey, I am seeing some great who/what/where/when / why poems recently. his contest is lots of fun. You did great with the concept.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/22/2012 1:56:00 PM

Wonderfully written, Joyce. This is a different sort of challenge.