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Why I Loved C D Poem Illuminations of Wonder and Warmth

Illuminations of Wonder and Warmth from the sky’s black velvet cloak points of light emanate drawing the wonder of all who see    but are these sequin stars or tears in the fabric of heaven from which our lost loved ones look down smiling to let us know they are happy    one special star reveals a most welcome sight – the face of my husband    after all these years, John remains ever loving ever watching over me   view the night sky are we seeing distant, fiery orbs of light or do our hearts see something else    fear of the afterlife is replaced by warmth a desire to be among illuminated faces… those whose journeys have ended  Written March 21, 2020 Copyright © Carolyn Devonshire | Year Posted 2020
I chose this "Trophy Winner" because it shows her warmth and love.
  
I looked upon a star this week from above.
     
It showed brighter than before.
                                      
It must be Carolyn shinning back from a heavenly shore.
  
With her journey now on earth ended.
                             
I wait to see her in her new home where she is independent.
             
One more angel now graces heaven's gates.
                    
No more tears just her husband waiting for many dates.
 
Date Written: 8/15/2021
 
A Rhyme
 
1 place
Celebrating Carolyn's Poetry: An Uncontest Contest
Judged:9/19/2021 Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 9/22/2021 5:13:00 AM
Oh my, what a beautiful poem you chose dear Paula... and yes, the brightest star you saw this week surely must be Carolyn shining from Above... Thanks for choosing and sharing this poem of Carolyn and congrats on your win my friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/22/2021 11:58:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one. She is the brightest star I see at night. Heaven has yet another angel. Have a blessed day........................
Date: 9/21/2021 1:31:00 AM
Paula a testimony to her love
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/22/2021 11:55:00 AM
Thank You, for your note. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this write. She was so loving and kind. Heaven has another angel. Have a blessed day........................
Date: 9/11/2021 5:25:00 PM
oh how nice this is. I don't think I read this poem of hers before and I love that you likened it to seeing HER also in the stars as you thought of her. Thanks so much for showing this dazzling poem of Carolyn's to us. (I am trying to see as many of my entries as possible before the contest closes!)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/12/2021 11:42:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this special write. I still cannot believe she is gone. Have a blessed day........................
Date: 8/16/2021 11:15:00 AM
A write that triumphs over sadness...Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2021 11:20:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this one. Yes, "triumphs over sadness." Have a blessed day........................
Date: 8/16/2021 5:32:00 AM
Lovely words. So enchanting. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2021 11:19:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this very special write. Have a blessed day........................
Date: 8/15/2021 11:00:00 PM
Wow! loved the way you rhymed your response, Paula:)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2021 11:17:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this rhyme write. Have a blessed day........................

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