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Why I Fell

I saw the unsightly sights of the world through your eyes.. Got lost in the reflection, of your imperfect perfection.. Was intrigued by your interesting train of thought.. Your intellect was bought.. Gifted like presents, like a kid in a candy store, giddy in your presence .. Soaked up your essence like rays of the sun.. Absorbed your mental telepathy.. Interestly enough, it was your persona that got me.. Baited me like fish on a hook, my infactuation had me shook.. A lack of understanding, i wasnt ready for this.. piss poor planning.. Had me fanning, pacing the floor.. NO ONE has gotten so deep in my mind before.. Staining my brain with memories of great remembrance.. The delighted feeling i felt..made no sense.. Hence your place in my life, Standing in the doorway of love's bliss.. Happily content..Embracing every little sentiment of love's affection.. To this day, i know the exact moment in which, you gave my heart an ********.. Stimulating a mental ******.. Freeing feelings once enslaved to the corridors of my mental asylum.. Now my feelings...I no longer hide them.. Exposed myself, baring it all.. it was all because of your mental, I began to fall

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Date: 6/8/2013 3:30:00 AM
You gave my mind an erection...you must have given him a new direction:) It's great to read your piece this morning Tiffani, welcome to the Soup my dear friend. PoetrySoup is a pleasant platform to share your heart and art. Feel free to enter member contests as it will help you gain more exposure and thereby learn. The pages has a lot of features that might interest you. Enjoy your stay. Peace and Friendship, Adeleke
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Date: 6/6/2013 6:08:00 PM
Well written! Thank you for sharing welcome to the soup!!- ed
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Date: 6/6/2013 10:24:00 AM
Falling for an awakening. Very, very intense. Excellent flow here!
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Date: 6/5/2013 11:51:00 PM
- Beautiful love poem Tiffani! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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