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Why Hate

My heart in hand Still-beating like drums Why do you hate me so?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/26/2015 1:26:00 AM
A fine little piece, John, well done! Regards, Viv
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John Monteblanco
Date: 10/27/2015 4:21:00 PM
Thank you very much
Date: 10/25/2015 5:29:00 PM
awww, a sad one, but i really like it. Congrats for the win.
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John Monteblanco
Date: 10/27/2015 4:21:00 PM
Thanks! This was a new form for me, might continue writing these.
Date: 10/25/2015 3:34:00 PM
great question! congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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John Monteblanco
Date: 10/27/2015 4:19:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 10/25/2015 1:29:00 PM
They obviously don't know you yet! Congrats on your win.
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John Monteblanco
Date: 10/27/2015 4:19:00 PM
Thank you!

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