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Why Fight a Fight That's Already Lost

As he once again broke through his selfmade illusions He noticed that the feeling of both love and sorrow remained so he closed his eyes and acknowledged his defeat before the battle even begun He just couldn't take down his opponent, even if it didn't exist

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Date: 2/28/2016 7:49:00 AM
Tommy, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/1/2010 5:38:00 PM
Hi Tommy, A deeply emotional heartfelt poem. Love it! Welcome to the soup. I'm sure you'll love it here as much as I do. Thanks for sharing. Happy New Year to you and yours. I look forward to reading more of your wonderful poetry. Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/29/2009 11:57:00 AM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Tommy. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2009 6:30:00 PM
The mind can be our enemy...how do we fight something that is a part of who we are? This is a very creative write, always, Christy
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Date: 12/28/2009 4:32:00 PM
The mind's illusion sometimes poses the greatest foe, for it is what the mind believes. HAPPY NEW YEAR. Sincerely, Moses
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