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Why Did You Let Go Daddy

You always loved her more My heart you let go Sometimes I wonder what I did wrong Sometimes even if you cared Was I such a bad girl? Why didn't you love me too? Even when she left, all you did was mourn for her Now that I have grown, I still see no love Daddy, what ever happened? You're just a stranger to me now I'm still your little girl You didn't have to let go Why do you stay so silent Why don't you tell me you love me so...

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Tim Smith

Date: 10/10/2015 7:08:00 PM

This is so sad Serenity. I want to run to my kids and tell them I love them.

Skat A

Date: 10/10/2015 11:43:00 AM

Serenity, Congratulations on your win. SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/8/2015 2:22:00 AM

Wonderful write Serenity! Congrats on superb win!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/7/2015 4:20:00 PM

Oh, my gosh. I came to congratulate you, but feel more like I should hug you. Such sadness and emotion - I don't know what to write other than to tell you I care and I'm extremely touched. If your sister died, your Father may be avoiding the pain of losing you, too, by hardening his heart. If that isn't the case, time can do amazing transformations ... CayCay

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 10/7/2015 10:13:00 AM

Congratulations.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/24/2015 4:56:00 PM

Heartbreaking poem , It is sad for anyone to feel less loved than his brother or sister. Many times parents act this way unintentionally, but it still hurts. Its good to let our parents know we feel neglected, but I know it ain't that easy. Your verses touched me deeply dear friend.