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Why Are We In This World

Why are we in this world: Is it to betray one another with incessant lies, or to hope when all seems lost. Coming from both sides; neither of these reasons seem worth living. On one end you have family and friends that you've grown to trust however, when you think you know them they show a completely new side and treat your back like its a dart board. And on the other you've lost everything, you take charge and charge keeps knocking you down, you take action and actions keeps fighting back. That is when you wish for the best and the best never come, only then you begin to realize...life is a diminishing light like the stars in the sky that prove they were there and only in time prove to disappear. However between that time it takes to diminish; proves to be..a light of hope

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Date: 4/5/2015 10:32:00 PM
MIGUEL, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
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Date: 9/20/2014 12:47:00 PM
Hi Miguel, this is such a deep powerful, emotional piece! Excellent write! I extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup and wish you happy writings. Pandita
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Miguel Torres
Date: 9/28/2014 1:30:00 AM
Thank You!!!
Date: 9/19/2014 11:11:00 AM
Miguel, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Miguel Torres
Date: 9/28/2014 1:20:00 AM
Thank you...but i feel im not ready for a poetry contest yet. but i will keep it in mind

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