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Why and Because

Looking back at the time the love that was That certain beauty the why and the because The look of the eye's made by God Part of the answer the why and because The hair situated for applause another of my reasons the why and because The magnetism of eye's that awe that bothersome stare the why and because The preciousness of secret desire not of lust but loves special power The presence of dreams both day and night The eye's definition of the gift of sight My thoughts of her speaking if she might and my idiotic response my sovereign right Guarding my feelings with unwritten laws another form of suffering my why and because

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Judy Ball

Date: 6/19/2023 6:30:00 PM

Memories of the past are so sweet and they make the present so much nicer. But it is important not to dwell on what was and to enjoy what is now. Often the past is what the present grows from so we must be careful to tend the garden of the present so that in future we can remember with fondness. A beautiful write my friend. Bravo. God Bless, JB

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/19/2023 4:49:00 PM

Another masterpiece, John. It conveys profound reflections on a love of the past that will not be easily forgotten.

Judy Ball

Date: 6/11/2023 10:40:00 AM

Ah love. Is it just a chemical reaction or is it something more. Sometimes it's hard to tell the difference. A beautiful write my friend. Love it. God Bless, JB

Jack Horne

Date: 6/11/2023 8:29:00 AM

another one we can all relate to, for sure - very well expressed

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/10/2023 6:01:00 PM

hmm sometimes keeping our feelings to ourselves can be cause for regret, nicely penned, loving and deep

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/7/2023 8:31:00 PM

Masterfully written, with well conveyed thoughts on a memorable past love.

Joseph May

Date: 6/7/2023 6:05:00 AM

Reflecting on reasons of love's loss, Very nicely penned

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/6/2023 12:59:00 PM

Love the refrain, John…that is often key to a good poem! The beauty, the passion, the guarded feelings, suffering…

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/6/2023 12:47:00 PM

Interesting work penned by you. Thanks for sharing your thoughts of the why of your love for your former girlfriend. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2023 12:45:00 PM

They say "the eyes have it" and like this poem you wrote, you sure prove it!