Why

He is there ......somewhere in the mist Waiting for me..... why does he care To give me his heart.......am I worthy Why do I hold back....... why can't I take that first step Why cant I give myself ......what have I to lose Feelings i have ......I like him Wanting to be in his arms ...need that cuddle Still I hold back ....why am I so unsure Scared of losing again ..... the pain of loss Of heart being broken ....... such a fragile heart Why am I the fool ........ why cant I take the chance Why cant I say yes ......why the uncertainty Why !

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/24/2013 10:34:00 PM

A very touching poem!! Why Indeed??

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/25/2013 1:18:00 AM

I dont know why just yet....Seren

Jack Horne

Date: 8/22/2013 5:23:00 PM

I know this feeling, my friend - but hope you go for it, when he emerges from the mist : )

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/22/2013 7:46:00 PM

Hi my day will come, meanwhile life goes on....Seren

Wayland Bunch

Date: 8/22/2013 3:37:00 PM

I don't know the answers to questions like this. I feel like a fool, but ask me about time, space, good and evil and I will write books, how strange is life my very special friend. I hope you find all the answers, and know that maybe I was doomed from the start. I continue to enjoy all of your writings.

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/22/2013 7:49:00 PM

Hi Wayland, lovely to see you here commenting on my poem....Seren

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/22/2013 12:30:00 PM

Uncertaintly loves to blind was it clear & concise. Yet, it's only power to allow such a problem: Humans. We have the power of choice. Excellent work!

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/22/2013 7:50:00 PM

Hi Drake....thanks or your comment ...Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/22/2013 6:19:00 AM

This is a write that is filled with a lot of emotion, filled with passionate feelings of confusion and disdain! I really loved reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/22/2013 9:07:00 PM

Hi Russell, Thanks ..Seren.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 8/22/2013 6:09:00 AM

Stunning! Why do I get the feeling there is more feeling struggling to break free from the words of this poem?

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/22/2013 7:45:00 PM

Hmmm Monterey always more feelings lurking in tn background....Seren