Why

Why peoples killing each other While blood liking somewhere continual Why peoples this much suffering While weather is so beautiful.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/19/2013 11:01:00 AM

- Much pain in our world ... A very good poem Leila! - Thank you! - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your words and thoughts here with us. - Write, read and give your comment to others. - Good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 4/16/2013 4:38:00 PM

Leila. Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT