Why

Why is it so that you have to fight ? when you know you're all brothers and this aint right... Why is it so that you have to be greedy? when you have enough, more than the poor and needy... Why is it so that you have to be jealous? when you know its not right and may even hell us... Why is it so that you are not thankful to the ALMIGHT? when you see others dying...how can you bear such a sight? Why is it so that you have become blind with fame and pride just in your mind? But the time will come when you all will see and regret and weep and then no one will be forgiven and will be sent to an unimaginable place no man has seen and there they'll be punished and wont even have their family there to lean.......

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Ayesha Akhtar

Date: 1/27/2014 7:23:00 AM

Wow !! You're amazing Husna !! And you told me at school today that you suck at poetry ??!! A White Lie !! ;))

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/21/2013 1:38:00 AM

You ask all the right questions... unfortunately the answers are hard to find. At the end of the day we all just try to do our best, but things often get... out of control. The line that made me stop and think the most was the last part... "no family to lean on"... I think that's the worst consequence for doing wrong. No one to even understand what you're going through in the hard times... really liked both of your poems, hope you write more soon :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2013 3:08:00 PM

Hum,, Husna, a very interesting poem... many reasons ans why's.. love both your poems so far... please let me know when you post another poem.. always~ LINDA

David Williams

Date: 1/20/2013 8:25:00 AM

Husna a very cool write, a big welcome to the soup...David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/19/2013 11:07:00 AM

Husna, your poem is well written. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure to share your poems here with us. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Husna Mirza
Date: 1/20/2013 6:59:00 AM

Thank you Anne !:D

Carol Eastman

Date: 1/19/2013 8:48:00 AM

Makes you think... Are you related to WaQar U. Mirza?

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/18/2013 6:48:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, if you need any help just holler. Your form is Couplet. Light & love