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Why

I could smell the steam off the pavement from the fallin rain I could still here the ringing in my ear from the shots that silenced the night The taste of fear caused my voice to tremble My eyes burned from the mixture of my salty sweat and tears Just seconds ago you were here and nothing else mattered I had not a care in the world, till your laugh turned into a gurgle Your full of life everyday bounce to your step, fell limp I held you there lifeless, remembering all the times you held me and made me feel alive.Now I am surrounded by strangers and feel more alone than ever, I keep asking why? No one answers? I have lost all faith¸ WHY ? WHY? WHY? …………………………………….. Silence………………………………………………………………….. THERE IS NO GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 3/14/2016 12:21:00 AM
wow, strong emotions... Love the read...---linda
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Date: 8/11/2010 7:03:00 PM
Well expressed inner thoughts, Michael
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Date: 8/11/2010 7:00:00 PM
all emotions felt, if this truly happened to you i'm very sorry
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