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Whspers of Light

Tickled with wet prisms
Cocooned with the dead head of trees
Synchronized in natures rhythms
Her skin dancing with shadows in a breeze

Good morning Misses Sun
Inhaling the exhalants of the plants
Worries has she? None.
In spring showers she does gallivant.

After noon parade of Clouds
What stories in shapes do you bring me?
I see you’re not in lack of drought
I do love the song of thunder you sing me

So soon Mister Moon
I’m ready for the spotlight summons
Rolling in your dark doom
The now dry sky cries diamonds

How I love the day
How I love the Night
More than I can ever say
Mmm Whispers of the light.

-B. Maxine

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  1. Date: 8/22/2014 6:01:00 AM
    World's revolution is controlled by God's gravitation, While world if filled with His satiation, So instead of you just standing clear, Get involved and always try to be close and near. Jim Horn

  1. Date: 8/5/2014 8:23:00 AM
    Silence Somewhere To only itself will silence speak And may sound rather weak Never, ever will hear it at all Doesn't care who it will appall. Rushing in silence may often try But now has gone and passed by No longer again will it ever last Has become of the previous past Silence so stern where have you been When I was trying to let you in I still never know where you are Have you sought silence from a star? James Thomas Horn Retired Veteran

  1. Date: 8/5/2014 8:07:00 AM
    As soft whispers while away the light. You know something? You and I are great poets even there are those out there who might not want to admit it. There is much depth and meaning to your poems. Would be interesting if you were on YouTube reading them out loud. Wonder how you could do it. Jim Horn

    Horn Avatar James Horn
    Date: 8/22/2014 5:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear Maximum Revolution, Obtain a tape recorder or have one installed on your computer. Record your poem and play it back to yourself. I really should try this myself some day. Sounds like another one of my great ideas. Did you per chance read my August 16th Poem of the Day? Would like your opinion. Jim Horn
    Revolution Avatar B. Maxine Revolution
    Date: 8/22/2014 12:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sorry for the late response and for the lovely comments. As far as reading it aloud it's something I've been really considering! Again thank you for encouraging and soulful comments!
  1. Date: 8/5/2014 8:01:00 AM I have become entranced by your poems and will continue on. You and I are part of the few rhyming poets left. Jim Horn

  1. Date: 3/30/2014 5:34:00 PM
    B MAXINEA, beautiful poem and win, :) Congratulations..... XOX ~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/27/2014 12:08:00 PM
    Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 3/26/2014 8:47:00 PM
    Wonderful poem Maxine.. Congrats on your great poem!

  1. Date: 3/26/2014 7:13:00 PM
    This is lovely....congratulations on the win

  1. Date: 3/26/2014 10:04:00 AM
    as soulful as it can get, maxine.. big cheers on your top win... huggs

  1. Date: 2/20/2014 11:56:00 PM
    Loved it! One of my favorites

  1. Date: 2/8/2014 5:11:00 PM
    I enjoyed the wonderful imagery in this carefree, and somewhat whimsical poem. A beautiful write, B. Maxine!...Thank you for the great comments. I appreciate it very much.