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Who's in control? #2

I'm walking my floors
Like a rattle
Being creative
Starting, some drama
Looking at my image

Reading my literature
Reading my novel
Reading my rhymes
Look at my style 
Look at my talent
I'm exotic
Very professional

Look at the vine
Listen, to the melody
Drink some wine
Protect my line

This is my tempo
I'm the, Dare Devil
I'm a Iron Horse

Look at my texture
Look at the velvet
Just like nylon
Maybe polyester
Do you like rayon

Want me, purified
Want me, begging
Put on a collar
Make commands
Give me discipline
Tell me to fetch
Tell me heel
Or, put me on a leash

Show me obedience
Give me a routine
Show me a trick
When do we train
Who , shall I be

Your bear, who cares
Your bird, who flies
Black-eyed Susan
Or, maybe a whale

Can I be
What I, wanna be
No, as I can see
I'm at home
Sitting alone
Crying my words
Writing my rhymes

I'm a image
Behind doors
Sitting at home
Writing this poem
All alone

Do I, pick up the phone
Do I, open the door
Do I, walk my floors
Do I, draw a picture
Do , I care to dare
What, I'm in for

Life is so hard
With no lifeguard
I send my regards
I feel so far
Never so near
Having, so much fear
I send a tear
Have no fear
Now, I make this clear

I'm not confuse
I'll never be misused
Just abused
By, what I tell you

Your never a friend
We'll never amend
But, just condemn
Simple as sin
As, you try to win

I sit at home 
Sit alone
With, no where to go
Continuing this flow
Who's not cold
Always bold
Has no control
Always listening
To whats told

Joy, fear, sadness and love
Holds, my hands
Holds, my image
Gives me, no discipline

Gives me one thing
Lets, me see
Lets, me be
Lets, me understand
Who, I am
Deep down in this sand

Without, no tears
Put them away
Start a new day
Write a new poem
After we pray
For a better day
Writing no pain

As you lay
Lay by a, (Queen)
On this day
This day we pray
Pray for a better day

While I say, Amen


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  1. Date: 10/20/2010 10:47:00 AM
    Good afternoon Delilah. The weekend and half this week are gone and this is the first I have had a chance to read. Had so much drama in my life. Really feeling good reading poetry today. Glad yours was among them. Love, Carol