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Whoosh

Joanna Davis The whoosh of time it flies ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~so fast From the dawn of our birth, To the dusk of our past. If the legacy is filled with the laughter of child-like dreams, it explodes with joy and bursts at the seams The residue will fly right out into space Then when you’re older hit you right in the face Your smile will be big your eyes will be wide Then~~~~~~~~~~ whoosh you’re right back To when you were a child.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/4/2011 9:22:00 AM
Nice mental images, good flow!
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Date: 8/4/2011 8:55:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jo. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2021 2:46:00 AM
Many thanks for all your kind words. I was just going over my poetry and found my very first poem, I wish you all the very best, and thanks for your warm wishes.

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