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Whom Serves...Whom Taketh Away

Imagination's ingenuity ushered forth from minds acuity creations utility which flows fluidly unhampered by ungracious cruelty A worm of earth produces role lower organism such as mole without the tree provideth air do we as human dare to care Nature provides for all on earth our mutual response to each in worth despondant are those whom dominate believing nature to serve which they create The highest organism we as human of role and purpose mediate numen natural cycles clear distinct.... .....must be mindful avoid extinct....

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Date: 6/11/2008 1:35:00 PM
So much truth shared in this poem. The last line leaves the reader with something to think about--an asset for any poem. Nice use of imagery to forward your thoughts. Keep on writing! Best wishes. Karen
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Date: 6/11/2008 3:25:00 AM
Yes! Be mindful and remember oneself, live in the perpetual now, and the whole world will shift. Awesome poem of truth! XO Kristin
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Date: 6/10/2008 10:07:00 PM
Jay that was a fantastic write - the flow and message were perfect - the last line concluded the poem perfectly - great job
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Date: 6/10/2008 4:49:00 PM
Hi Jay If only all the world could think this way now.... but we'll get there eventually, the law of natural evolution. Just wish we could all appreciate it today....Perhaps some of us all ready do like some folks who think like me and you. Excellent write. I just loved this! Your friend in poetry Love Light Truth Patricia Check out my latest, I too wrote of a tree today, we must be on the same wave length ha!
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