Whoa

Whoa!...To all the evil That we seldom can see is real Whoa!...To all the broken hearts That can now no longer feel Whoa!...To all the tears That to easily begin to start Whoa!...To all the sadness That gets sealed within our heart Whoa!...To all the depression That gets trapped within our mind Whoa!...To all the sorrow That our hearts always seem to find Whoa!...To all the pain, and suffering That cloud up our once bright skies Whoa!...To the veil of falling tears That fall from the angels eyes This world can be a sad, and somber place That on occasion we all shall find Though the best thing to do is wipe it all away Then cleanse your heart, soul, and mind Dan Kearley: 12-19-12

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/26/2013 11:55:00 PM

Dan, , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 1/29/2013 2:43:00 PM

WOHA; to this wonderful poem that you have written. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/3/2013 4:04:00 PM

Yes, we would want only sunshine and happiness for everyone if we could have that..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the kind review of my work..Sara

Kerry Singleton

Date: 12/29/2012 6:03:00 PM

Had to favour this 1 :)

Kerry Singleton

Date: 12/29/2012 6:02:00 PM

I love this Dan, just awesome!! So so true this world is getting colder with the somber upon it, time for change I believe..

The Situation

Date: 12/28/2012 6:03:00 PM

Whoa said all when they faced a gun. Whoa said the millions when the hurrican blocked the sun. Whoa cried the citizens when they launched the bombs. Whoa cried a mother when they crucified her son.

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 12/25/2012 8:55:00 AM

very nice written poem Dan... enjoyed your sharing so much,,, and wishing you a merry christmas day,,, big big hugs:) <3<3<3

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/23/2012 11:01:00 AM

A quick visit to your nice poem,Dan. - Wishing you a peaceful and happy Christmas! - / / I'm sending you a big Christmas hug!! f.e.f. oxox Anne-Lise :) - / /

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/23/2012 9:46:00 AM

I like how you played on the word Whoa. Hoping for a halt to the woe of these things, Dan. May the world be wiped clean of the sadness!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/22/2012 7:00:00 AM

a wonderful heartfelt and very realistic poem, Dan need to be written...

Jack Ellison

Date: 12/20/2012 4:58:00 PM

The key... "cleanse your heart, soul, and mind"... we all have this capability! A great write! Cheers

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2012 3:25:00 PM

Yes... we seem to keep falling at the most... sometimes i think the depression is still there... wish i could say more... xox~pd

Carl Fraser

Date: 12/19/2012 3:10:00 PM

Thats right Dan and theres only one way to obtain that cleansing, well done my friend, blessings, Carl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/19/2012 2:01:00 PM

soup mail..pd

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/19/2012 10:53:00 AM

No, no boy this must end ... up with your head and give me a hug .... :) - oxox / / f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 12/19/2012 10:05:00 AM

I agree with this all the way Dan!!!!

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 12/19/2012 3:14:00 AM

Wow...this is a lovely rhyming poem and a really touching one at that Dan! This is so true we all at some point in our lives feel all of those feelings and sometimes we feel them more often than we want...but finding the place to be- to sweep it all away......for heart soul and mind is definitely the key! - loved this Dan - hugs - Shaz

David Williams

Date: 12/19/2012 1:44:00 AM

Dan, I am right with you...David