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Who Would Want To Be You X 2

If you wanna know whats in my mind un-normal things that normal people just dont find Its like a break from the norm 2 steps to the right into the centre of the room my mind is your doom time is nothing but something to consume yesturday feels so much like tomorrow but yet you sit sit sit do not understand typical 2 steps to the left breath breath breath take a seat repeat take a seat If you want to know whats in my mind find it for me open it if its empty its lost just what i thought WHERE IS MY MIND.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/5/2010 10:50:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Ashlew. Please continue to write and share with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2010 5:32:00 AM
interesting ideas--could be a deep topic.
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