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Who Will Save Your Soul

Didn't walk five miles per hour this morning Barely three For little more than two Slow enough to feel the sun Touch me Through tall tree shadows Stretched over the trail Slow enough to feel Loved and protected So, why doesn't everyone Old man on a Harley At the trail crossing Too tough to smile, good day Like I did, when I stopped for him Motorcycles, guns and trucks Don't compensate For what it takes to be a man And that's what she was trying to say About the masculine energy Being all she felt I stop to watch a woodpecker Banging his head against an ancient tree Sigh I see Jewel singing at Woodstock 1999 "Who will save your soul If you won't..." And that's just it You won't I ponder what heals Just being here In the North Country So easy You don't even have to water your lawn And the Black River is big and loud But gentle as a dove At the end of the path Leading down to its shore Beach gravel crunches It spreads wide and runs still here Across the water a lone fisherman In a yellow boat I'd like to be him Always found comfort here If I am here Not just passing through As I most often do I might need a hit of acid Once in a blue moon To rewire my brain Around the guilt, loss, and shame But listening to rivers, trees, birds and sunshine Usually heals whatever hurts Why not everyone We can only wish She was right about the energy We can all be in tune If we just--will There are trails where I live That soothe the soul Lost and forgotten Guess I had to come here To find them Sigh

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Date: 11/19/2022 8:11:00 PM
Steven, here you took me walking along on that trail, but it wasn’t for two miles…I think it rested, climbed a tall tree at Woodstock, listening to Janis, while hungry but loved, in the mud…you hardly sound old, and you don’t write old either. Your poetry journey= discoveries. sally
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Steven Young
Date: 11/20/2022 8:50:00 PM
Sally, you got me at "Janis, while hungry, but loved, in the mud" To hear her would feel like heaven even were I starving. Thank you again!
Date: 7/26/2022 9:20:00 AM
Steven, I have to say that your poetry is being overlooked by many, despite the number of views you receive, no one leaves a comment. Do they not comprehend what thoughts you are conveying? Honestly, in some lines neither do I, but I think I feel a depth of sorrow. Not for yourself, but for others, and the visions you have of others. I'll read more.
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Date: 7/27/2022 11:20:00 PM
Jenna, my visions for everyone, yeah, I'm Aquarious, the great humanitarian--I care. As far as not comprehending the thoughts I convey--I'm like a two year old pointing fingers at the moon. I see it, feel it, and try to express it. It's not always crystal clear--I'm just trying to make meaning. As far as being overlooked, I don't feel that at all. Not after you just left the deepest, most insightful comment I've ever received. Thank you, Jenna!

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