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Who Wants To Be Immortal?

Like a phoenix you tumble, hurt, and renew; you grow old and grey and yet you live through. As you watch those around you slowly pass on, your children, grandchildren; yet still you're not done. Technology booms, the world grows much faster, through wars and starvation; watch weather's disaster. Would you really want to live through it all? To be historic relic, and be immortal? I wouldn't.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/4/2009 7:02:00 AM
This is all True it hits like a bullet when you take time to really think ...Blessings
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