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Who loves you more than I

Who loves you more than I?
The sun rises as you wake,
stars fire brighter in the sky,
the wind blows over the lake, 
nature forgets its daily tasks  
as you sleep a timeless sleep,
I see angels wearing masks 
to hide tears as they weep.
You smile unwary of this.
A dream that is only a dream
lead me to wander amiss 
with no aid of your eyes’ beam…
Who loves you more than I
Who loves you more than I…

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  1. Date: 9/15/2013 1:32:00 AM
    love it

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 2:33:00 AM
    a pledge of sinciere love grandeur than others so it seems..lovely

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 4:15:00 PM
    I love the title and content of this poem J, well done xxx

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 3:55:00 PM
    stunning , well written . I like It !