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Who Looks Forward To Seeing Snow

Temperatures constantly drop, the first chill stroke my unknown sense, that sense which causes depression: when winter knocks once as luck does to state its indisputable intention.... who looks forward to seeing snow? Children like snow and some adults do also, but thinking of how cold it will get, most of us rather think of sunny beaches on those islands savoring summer's dreams... then who looks forward to seeing snow? By the ajar door, where shivering robins eat my breadcrumbs, I hold and sip a hot cup of Miss Swiss chocolate and curiously watch how they struggle with their iced beaks: I pity them and let them in...who looks forward to seeing snow?

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Date: 11/8/2011 10:35:00 PM
I LOVE this one, Andrew because I for one, HATE snow (mainly because of the way it effects my drive to work. haha) I love how you did this poem too. We sure enjoy snow when we are children!
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Date: 11/7/2011 10:00:00 AM
There are a great many who do in this mountainous state, but not I. I am afraid of snow over ice on the roads. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/7/2011 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations to you for your win in Brian's "Any Which Way" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2011 5:29:00 AM
Congrats Andrew on a fantastic win in Brian's contest with this momentous poetry my friend..luv..
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