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Who Is To Blame

You told me she looks amazing I believed you You gave me her phone number I called her She sounded like someone I'd love to meet I arranged a meeting Not wanting her to see me first I stood on a balcony above the streets I looked at the crowds below There she was She reached for her phone and called me But i did not receive the call She wasn't as amazing as you had told me And so I watch as she walks away heartbroken Knowing that it had ended before it begun. WHO IS TO BLAME

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Moon Flower

Date: 5/29/2016 12:35:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Liru. :)

Skat A

Date: 5/26/2016 3:15:00 AM

liru magari, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/26/2016 2:34:00 AM

Interesting poem, Liru Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Liru Magari
Date: 5/26/2016 2:42:00 AM

thanks Linda. am a lover of poetry though I had never thought of writing any. this is my first.