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Who Is My Neighbour

He never knocks on my door I only see him outdoors I mostly see him smoking, sitting on the stairs Sometimes holding a beer bottle in the air He always smiles and waves "hi" But she, in the next door is so shy Her little dog is not though That little cuteness always has words to say, although The far neighbour's dog, that is huge and serious Always gets me hurried to my door, he seems so furious August 30th 2015 Sponsor Name Mystic Rose Contest Name Who Is Your Neighbor

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Date: 8/31/2015 9:01:00 AM
short, but i like it, i have been looking at some of your work. Breathless.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 2:24:00 PM
wow thank you Jack
Date: 8/30/2015 8:46:00 PM
Writing about neighbors and family situations is good material for poems. I liked yours. If he's a drinker, maybe you shouldn't care if he sticks to himself. And thanks for visiting my three short poems, my friend. Blessings, Darlene
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 8/31/2015 5:19:00 AM
Thank u Darlene. As u can see in this neighborhood everybody kinda cares for themselves
Date: 8/30/2015 7:14:00 PM
G'day njeri... sadly these days we just don't get to know our neighbours like we once did - good luck njeri - Lindsay
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 8/31/2015 4:49:00 AM
Very true.Thank you Lindsay. I appreciate the visit
Date: 8/30/2015 4:15:00 PM
get the dogs to become friends - best way to meet the neighbour lol:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 8/30/2015 4:27:00 PM
Lol thats true. Thank u Jadazzle

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