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It’s Christmas Eve; there’s someone at my door! But with the horrid sound outside my window, I wonder who is knocking and what for! Midst violent wind I see a surreal snow! Within it’s haze, there is a grotesque sight - gigantic and so out of place, I quiver! A snowman leers at me, and frigid fright goes through my bloodstream like an icy river. Again, the knock! Whoever could it be? This morning I wished Christmas would be gone! A premonition now is telling me that nothing good is out there on my lawn. My friend had warned me that I really ought not curse this season. Oh, what have I done? More pounding at the door, but I cannot go near that door; there’s nowhere I can run. I look out at the snowman. He is more enormous than a tree, and now I hear a sound like laughing elves outside the door. I stand as thought I’m paralyzed by fear. That movie! There’s a movie I heard of. A boy hates Christmas, wishing it away. A storm brews suddenly in skies above, heralding a deadly Christmas day. A Shadow Santa comes. This wicked soul is known as Krampus, and he brings with him an evil that can swallow people whole. If I have summoned him, my fate is grim. The storm keeps wailing; now there’s a new sound of scratching on my roof, but there is no more knocking. Oh, who’s walking all around my roof? I run out to the blinding snow! At first I can see nothing till my eyes are drawn to where a great big bag was put beside my door. What’s this? More Santa lies? Though filled with dread, I push it with my foot. There jumps out from the bag the strangest thing - A tiny man; he’s made of gingerbread! He laughs maliciously, and starts to sing, “Before the night is over, you’ll be dead.” Out on my lawn, I see beneath the snow there’s something creeping fast and right toward me! What creature slithers underneath the snow? I can’t escape, so back inside I go! I shut the door and bolt it, then collapse Upon my sofa near the fireplace, when I hear an eerie sound above. It taps, taps, taps. It’s something on the roof again! Past Christmases with family go through my frantic mind; I cower there and wait. It’s Krampus, and he’s up there in the flue, and soon to be delivering my fate! Written Dec. 24, 2015/ Inspired by the contest of TAMMY REAMS and the current Christmas horror movie Krampus.

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Date: 1/19/2016 6:47:00 AM
you depicted scary description before my eyes and i like your creativity . great work
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Date: 1/8/2016 11:58:00 PM
ANDREA, Congrats on your win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/4/2016 10:02:00 AM
ANDREA, Congrats on your "Who is Knocking at my Door? WIN... Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 1/3/2016 9:23:00 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 1/3/2016 6:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/3/2016 6:10:00 AM
Andrea freaking out was surely interesting! Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 1/2/2016 3:03:00 PM
love this scary write
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Date: 1/1/2016 10:50:00 AM
This would make a great movie. You created such a descriptive frightening poem.
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Date: 12/29/2015 5:13:00 PM
WOW! This is great--a skillfully-written, suspenseful narrative poem. Janice
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Date: 12/27/2015 12:00:00 PM
Quoth the Christmas raven, "Nevermore," eh. This Krampus is a scary dude or ghoul or whatever. Love it, but I take it you didn't write this one for kids. Love, daver
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Date: 12/26/2015 8:17:00 PM
Andrea, Krampus and I are old friends. He told me he just wanted to say hi, but you wouldn't open your door. Hope you had a great Christmas wonderful Lady.
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Date: 12/26/2015 5:38:00 PM
Great write Andrea...with all the chills of a halloween tale.... hugs
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Date: 12/25/2015 8:17:00 PM
enjoyed reading though it is scary,excellent imagery and rhyming,wish i had seen the film
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Date: 12/25/2015 7:47:00 PM
Great write
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Date: 12/25/2015 2:26:00 PM
Such scary imagery Andrea I feel quite chilled reading this - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/25/2015 3:03:00 PM
I think I'm glad I haven't I don't do scary except when I look in the mirror lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/25/2015 3:00:00 PM
You should see the movie!!!
Date: 12/25/2015 2:51:00 AM
Beautiful!!! Andrea..... Nice perspective too.... Loved the flow
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Date: 12/25/2015 1:01:00 AM
I feel kinda guilty now knocking on your door! Hugs and Merry Christmas!
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