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Who I Used To Be

Who i used to be, no one knows. Weeping and crying never showed I thought I was cool with that stick in my hand But it all revolved around a man A man who would lead me to do bad things I was like a puppet on a string Blinded by the love that was so naive He was one thing I thought I might need Who I used to be is different than who i am now I am stronger than i was yesterday Kinder if you will Who i used to be, no one knows.

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Date: 11/21/2015 10:29:00 PM
Hi Amanda, this is such an excellent first posting - sad but lovely piece! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/20/2015 3:06:00 AM
Hi Amanda, love your avatar. LINDA
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Amanda M.
Date: 11/20/2015 6:04:00 AM
Thank you! (:
Date: 11/19/2015 5:55:00 PM
Amanda, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/18/2015 9:50:00 PM
Hi Amanda, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Amanda M.
Date: 11/19/2015 6:10:00 PM
Thank you!!!

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