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who are you was the question so I have pondered that all day I am a girl who has travelled a tangled path with many dips and turns and twists a labyrinth journey it has been I have been at the bottom too often had to crawl back up to the top it was Gods hand that helped and each time I stood tall and began anew oh my pen drips blood I write my sadness with tears but dear reader these tears of sorrow do not mean that I am weak I have inside of me an unfathomable strength my journey has brought me to this place in time a place of tranquility and serenity perhaps to reach paradise on earth one must suffer I know that I have something very special for in my mind there is a freedom to do anything I want ___________________________ April 5, 2016 Free Verse For the contest, Who Are You, sponsor, Catie Lindsey Fourth Place

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Date: 4/25/2016 10:35:00 PM
I so agree, Constance: what doesn't break us makes us stronger. Congrats on a beautiful self revelation. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 4/26/2016 4:34:00 PM
SuZ, thanks so much for the congrats and the beautiful and hugs !!!
Date: 4/13/2016 5:33:00 AM
Hi BW. Congrats for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/14/2016 3:07:00 PM
Teddy, thanks so much for visiting me with congratulations, appreciate ~
Date: 4/11/2016 3:19:00 AM
A poem filled with self awareness that shines with the face of courage Constance. Congratulations on your deserving win. # 7. ; )
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Date: 4/13/2016 12:08:00 AM
Connie, thanks for the nice comment, the congratulations and the 7 ~
Date: 4/10/2016 10:39:00 PM
Broken, Congrats in Catie Lindsey's Who are you? contest. Love LINDA
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Date: 4/13/2016 12:09:00 AM
Linda, thanks for the congrats and the love ~
Date: 4/8/2016 10:39:00 PM
Broken Wings, worthy of a win! Great poem so much depth and insight into yourself..:)-luloo
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Date: 4/9/2016 1:55:00 PM
Laura, thanks for visiting with that nice comment, appreciate !
Date: 4/8/2016 12:24:00 PM
Lovely write which shows your strength and resiliency.. There is no feeling in the world like the well earned freedom that comes from falling and getting up as many times as needed to conquer our own journey. 7
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Date: 4/8/2016 2:05:00 PM
Shauda, thanks for that great comment and for visiting, appreciate ...
Date: 4/8/2016 3:15:00 AM
such a sad journey in life my friend:-( congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/8/2016 8:43:00 AM
Jan, thanks for your kindness always and the congrats and hugs~ xoxo
Date: 4/7/2016 8:19:00 PM
I really like this one Constance. Beautifully penned! Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Peace my friend:):) Spill ink!!!
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Date: 4/8/2016 8:44:00 AM
Daniel, thanks for the beautiful, the congratulations and the peace ***
Date: 4/7/2016 8:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in this difficult challenge. Thanks for sharing this work.
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Date: 4/8/2016 8:45:00 AM
Robert thanks for the congratulations, yes it was difficult to look into ones own soul ~~
Date: 4/7/2016 7:40:00 PM
wow, I really like this. Had not seen it yet. BIG congrats. I am so glad that she liked my poem and yours too, Constance.
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Date: 4/8/2016 8:46:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for the big congrats, yes happy she liked our poems too !!
Date: 4/7/2016 7:09:00 PM
Your journey has been a sad one, Broken Wings, but your undying strength show powerfully in this lovely poem. Beautifully written, and congratulations on your fine win. 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/8/2016 8:47:00 AM
Sandra, thanks for the lovely comment and the beautiful and congratulations, the 7 and of course the hugs ~xoxo
Date: 4/7/2016 6:21:00 PM
In our mind is the best freedom of all :), congrates on ur win in the contest Broken Wings
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Date: 4/8/2016 8:48:00 AM
Lewis, you are so right, freedom is something many do not have, thanks for the congrats, so appreciate //
Date: 4/7/2016 1:10:00 AM
I stood tall and began anew Love this line... Gr8 write
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Date: 4/7/2016 4:28:00 PM
Divya, thanks for visiting my poem and for the great comment ~
Date: 4/5/2016 11:54:00 AM
You are superb BW....The best 7!!!
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Date: 4/6/2016 9:40:00 AM
Anand, thanks for the superb and the 7 !!
Date: 4/5/2016 11:40:00 AM
Your last two lines lock me! Your words are of strength! Most definitely a 7 from me Broken Wings! Insightful and powerful words!
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Date: 4/6/2016 9:44:00 AM
Walter, thanks for the compliments and the 7 !
Date: 4/5/2016 11:25:00 AM
my pleasure to be part of your journey somehow, constance... this is wonderfully you.. huggs
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Date: 4/6/2016 9:47:00 AM
Nette, thanks for that nice comment and the hugs, appreciate !
Date: 4/5/2016 4:00:00 AM
whoops forgot to rate it so here's your 7:-)
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Date: 4/5/2016 9:04:00 AM
lol, thanks !!!
Date: 4/5/2016 3:56:00 AM
We all know you have something special too and we see the strength in you not the weakness. It takes courage to write, talk, and share things about ourselves especially about the more troubling parts, so I commend you on your bravery and I thank you for sharing.. 7++
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Date: 4/5/2016 9:03:00 AM
Brian, thank you for that incredible comment, I am overwhelmed by it, I think I am brave, I hold the pain inside me always but it does not stop me, if that makes any sense, thanks also for that 7 ++, appreciate so much !!

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