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to you my love in all honesty a desired dream i choose the power of wind blowing upon it's breeze i blow to you a kiss looking into the horizon it takes one's breath away windswept mountains remain forever beautiful trees bending again'st the breeze i whisper from deep passions burn waterfalls of love forever young melting desires within as the thunder roars one almighty clap forked light flashed you a beautiful dream in different planet melting away passed the very eyes handing to you my last petal falling feelings to the very soul handing over to you the heart of my blossom blooming got me in the heart of all honesty to you my heart blossoms to a rose

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Date: 9/22/2013 2:05:00 PM
Enjoyed this heart led write Liam ; I apprieciate your heartening comment..'
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Date: 9/22/2013 8:18:00 AM
so many beautiful lines and vivid images laced in this piece....love it! :) hugs
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Date: 9/22/2013 7:55:00 AM
This is a breathtaking piece, outstanding passionate piece.
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Date: 9/22/2013 6:24:00 AM
Hey buddy, Lovely as usual..Well done.. Ken
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Date: 9/21/2013 2:36:00 PM
so repetative of so many poets. whats new about it? several poets used these very same words today in one way or another. so block me! or impress me. show me what you got.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2013 3:46:00 AM
BY THE WAY EVERY WORD IN THE DICTIONARY HAS BEEN USED BEFORE
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2013 3:45:00 AM
OH I DO NOT NEED TO I AM ALREADY ACCOMPLISHED IN A FEW WORKS NOW YOU IMPRESS ME MORE TO THE POINT
Date: 9/21/2013 2:34:00 PM
This heart smells lovely with all its blooms and blossoms..Very romantic Liam
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Date: 9/21/2013 12:05:00 PM
like a blossoming of one's heart, this touches one's core, liam.. awesome!..:) huggs
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Date: 9/21/2013 11:05:00 AM
I love this, it's very romantic and touching to the heart.... Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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