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Who Do You Think I Am

Walking aimlessly through crime filled, city streets, a lost soul, wondering in the dark, having no purpose in life, nor a place to sleep. His hands trembling, from indulging, in alcoholic binges, trying to forget and escape, a myriad of thoughts, burdening him, in his drunken, stupor state. Do not judge this poor man, for you do not know, the struggles he's faced, and the hurt that his heart holds. His skin is wrinkled and dried from having no shelter, and being exposed to the sun. He smiles as he sits on a bench and watches an old squirrel chasing another, for fun. The winters are brutal in late December, as he looks for a place to hide. His frost bitten hands, are hurting so much, he curses and wishes to die. How can they drive by and not help this broken old man? They walk, they stare, they laugh, and do as little as they possibly can! Most people would think he is lost, and forgotten, but I say to you, God loves him, and he cares for the poor, lost and downtrodden. Reach out Michael Tor 9/9/2025 For Richard Lamoureux contest. Who do you think I am. I remember seeing a homeless man. It gripped my heart. I went to a deli that was close by and bought him two large subs. He thanked me. I'l never forget the thankful look he had on his face. I said to him pointing up, thank him. Please go out and reach out to the destitute. It will change your life forever. Also please take the time and read Richard Lamoureux poem Broken People if you have not read it.

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Date: 4/4/2020 1:18:00 PM
Beautiful sentiments in your, poem,Michael.
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Date: 10/9/2015 2:43:00 AM
God comes to us in many disguises Well Done Michael
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/18/2015 11:11:00 PM
Thank you Joan
Date: 9/12/2015 5:51:00 PM
Michael, what l just read was remarkable. I loved the form and the message. This was a great tribute piece to Richard's poem, he's one of the soup's most gifted poets. I think this gem should do well in the contest. Best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis 7 P.S. when you get a chance view my piece "The Missionary And The Bum"
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/25/2015 7:53:00 PM
Thank you Alexis. Richard is one of my favorite poets. Broken people is one of my all time favorites. He is very talented. We are fortunate to be able to enjoy his writes on this site.
Date: 9/12/2015 12:09:00 AM
finally reading what you wrote here in a reply to me. I don't normally see the replies because I turned off notifications on them, just to let you know. My fingers must be VERY Strong. they rarely get numb. haha
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Date: 9/9/2015 6:08:00 PM
what a lovely way to pay tribute to Richard's poem about broken people. I had the idea that Richard wanted us to tell what we thought of HIM (of Richard himself) through reading his poetry. I will have to go read his rules again! Anyway, your poetry proves you are a very thoughtful selfless person.
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/9/2015 11:08:00 PM
Thank you Andrea for your kind words. Are your fingers numb yet for congratulating all the winners? Lol mine are. I know how hard it is to comment on so many great writes. I appreciate you taking the time. I want to congratulate you on any win I missed. You had so many. You are very talented!
Date: 9/9/2015 4:04:00 AM
Nice write. The 3rd stanza is very poignant and so true.
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/9/2015 8:58:00 AM
Mark thanks for your comments. I feel the same way. Thank you for your comments.

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