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broken people- for in the end we are all broken stumbling and choking disguising hurt thinker poet storyteller Richard Lamoureux a deep insight into suffering and life the homeless and the outcast with compassion no matter creed color rich or poor seeing beneath the surface to the soul thinker poet storyteller makes us stop and ponder our life in his own words GOD is a source of all our creativity we are radios of a sort and if we tune in to the right channel we can access the message his poems well expressed powerful thinker poet storyteller fights against racism he has a message to tell GOD is good in poetry tough themes broken lifes straight from the heart be yourself write with depth be unique and genuine capture life he inspires us to write and in the end we are all broken people stumbling and choking and disguising our hurts Richard thanks for the compassion with which your share your thoughts with us ___________________________ September 2, 2015 Free Verse Inspiration - Broken People written by Richard Lamoureux and the line - for in the end we are all broken stumbling and choking disguising hurt For the contest, Who Do You Think I Am, sponsor, Richard Lamoureux First Place

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Date: 9/29/2015 1:17:00 AM
Very wonderful poem broken! Congrats on a fantastic first place win!
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Broken... Love SKAT
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Date: 9/28/2015 6:31:00 PM
BW, I see why you got the top spot. This piece is well deserving of 1st place. You did an amazing job.BW you answered "Who Do Think I Am" very well. You captured who Richard is in this write. Congratulations on your win.:-)Alexis 7
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Date: 9/28/2015 6:16:00 PM
Constance, this is an amazing write that captures the essence of Richard masterfully. Excellent! Congrats on a fine win! Hugs
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Date: 9/28/2015 5:52:00 PM
A well deserved first place finish, congratulations!
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Date: 9/28/2015 1:30:00 PM
Such a lovely tribute to Richard, Broken! Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/28/2015 12:40:00 PM
Congratulations Constance on your wonderful win with this lovely tribute to Richard!
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Date: 9/28/2015 9:49:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/28/2015 9:46:00 AM
a wonderful tribute congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/28/2015 9:12:00 AM
Kudos on your win with exceptional insight.
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Date: 9/28/2015 8:17:00 AM
I love your poem and Richard's poem that inspired yours. "We just have to turn into the right channel" is wonderful. Great poem.
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Date: 9/3/2015 7:27:00 PM
I love the line "we are radios of a sort and if we tune in to the right channel we can access the message". All the best in the contest.
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Date: 9/2/2015 2:57:00 PM
What a beauty, BW. How could anyone not like this. A beautiful poem and the guy you wrote it about is not bad either, haha.
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Date: 9/2/2015 10:48:00 AM
Enjoy A 7 for sure.ed this write, Constance!
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Date: 9/2/2015 9:46:00 AM
This is a lovely tribute to Richard, Constance....What a beauty of a write. He is all that you have said. He has had a powerful impact on my life. What speaks to me most about Richard...is his integrity. Lovely...So glad I got to read this beautiful piece. Hugs
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Date: 9/2/2015 8:52:00 AM
I am touched beyond words. Thank you Constance. What a beautiful piece you have created. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 9/2/2015 5:09:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, with many beautiful lines to our friend Richard - I wish you good luck in the contest .... and a lovely day B.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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