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Who Cares?

They are crying always, unhappy with the situation.......with where they are...with what they are doing, complaining and whining about the world.... waiting for a fairy godmother to make a change.....to take the responsibility...to undo the wrong deed to clean their self created mess.....also take the credit for the entire ordeal. No one wishes to be corrected.....and no one cares.... nothing makes an impact anymore....nothing left to talk anymore....nothing useful anymore, all is left is ignorance and aggression to hurt and make fun. “They are partial..unfair...biased and are the cause of this miserable phase which again is prolonged by them”, that's all i hear and say......i don't exclude myself...i am that person too....there is a name for it....human nature. Chief says they are abandoning me because of you...you are one sided...imperfect, but i say, hey chief.... are you perfect? ...are you just? ...and have you seen the mirror? , i get no answer... am not loud enough..... may be no answer is enough. It's funny how people always fail to see flaws in them......heights of ignorance...it certainly is a bliss. They give speeches on bringing a change.....and pretend....and pretend.....and pretend.....to think...with no realization of fooling themselves. The world's just living with no giving..........you may be writing but is someone reading? Have we lost something which was never there...or may be we like to remain blind! no place for thought....no place for the heart. I see curiosity....dismay....disheartenment.....agitation.....disturbance.....apprehension...and everything seems to be an illusion. It's all around me....it's in me......it's everywhere i go...in everyone i meet, no one questions........no one dares, show me someone......who cares!

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Date: 9/23/2010 12:18:00 PM
WOW! THIS POEM TAKES THE CAKE. I HAD TO READ THIS ONE TWICE. THE EXPRESSION AND THE LAST QUESTION. PUT A SMILE ON MY FACE, I LIKE THIS ONE ALOT. ADDING THIS TO MY FAVORITES RINKI, TAKE CARE*luv~SKAT
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Date: 8/23/2010 6:46:00 PM
An interesting and resounding commentary! I'll agree on most aspects here, though human nature can be honed to take on responsibility for ourselves and our choices/actions- I wish we were going more in that direction instead of away from it! Nice write. Best wishes- hugs, Kris
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