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Who Can We Trust

This day in time, I am never surprised, at the troubles we encounter, from deceit, and lies. One person's actions, can make others see, riches can be gathered, by planting bad seeds. Can't get enough, their wants never end, although their actions, are considered great sins. Who will pay, for this greed, and lust, the list is getting longer, of people we can't trust.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/14/2008 4:42:00 PM
Nice write...thanks 4 the comment.. read Waiting by the Window..and tell me what u think *Breana*
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Date: 12/4/2008 3:00:00 PM
Excellent piece trust is very hard to come by...Raul
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Date: 12/2/2008 1:15:00 PM
i tried to write this but i get too angry. the poor they work for less and less even in foreigen countries. and they pretend the don't know where terrorism comes from. but when the bullits start to fly and they are the targets then it's too late.
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Date: 12/2/2008 11:18:00 AM
This is sadly so true, but Ronald said it, we must trust in God, he's the only one we can really trust. Awesome write, Blessings to you! your friend, ~Michaela~
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Date: 12/2/2008 9:54:00 AM
In God we must trust, man will let you down every time. You do have a point things are getting worse, maybe a way to weed out the nonbelievers or set the stage what I feel is coming. Remember the parable of the farmer and where he cast his seed, We reap what we sow, Your friend Ron
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Date: 12/2/2008 7:13:00 AM
good!
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Date: 12/2/2008 6:26:00 AM
This poem speaks to me. I am finding my list is dwindling over the years. This write makes me think about how much growth I need to do as a person. Well crafted work. Chris.
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