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Who Are You

Who are you A fragrant breeze to be felt close, The sweetest red rose cuddling its origin, Kindest of heart that has a healing touch, Reflector to sunshine and nurture positive mind, All what I am not and just trying to be.. But surely I am ... a nature lover Pleading to preserve its beauty, a human being Far from hatred just caring, a heart that believes In equality for all life, Longing for ... peace and not wars, no discrimination to colour caste and religion, no exploitation or killing, Am I a theoriser an idealist or an escapist ? For readers to decide ... Written April 5th, 2016 For contest by Catie

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Date: 4/22/2016 6:43:00 PM
This is a thoughtful piece and in response to the last stanza, a beautiful hearted person! Thank you for your visit and comment! :-)
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Date: 4/10/2016 10:43:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congrats in Catie Lindsey's Who are you? contest. Love LINDA
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Date: 4/7/2016 9:12:00 PM
I haven't checked out the winner's list, but it looks like this did well! Great bio poetry here, Upma. Tenderly crafted with beautiful inner feelings. "Am I a theoriser an idealist or an escapist? For readers to decide ..." ... your open-ending was thoughtful too. A pleasure to read.
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Date: 4/7/2016 8:30:00 PM
very nicely done AND WON. Congrats.
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Date: 4/7/2016 8:12:00 PM
Congratulations Dr U on a most enjoyable work. I especially enjoyed your form and presentation as much as your message. The read is economical of word but most rich in message, well done. I must say you validated my impression of you, that's a good thing :0)
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Date: 4/7/2016 8:08:00 PM
Upma, I knew all of this already just from reading your poems. Congratulations for this wonderful write. Even if it is a small section of the list of beautiful qualities you possess. Peace Doc:):)
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Date: 4/6/2016 9:28:00 PM
You are very beautiful Human being lady!!! Very honest and sweet write Upama.....
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Date: 4/6/2016 6:09:00 PM
Conjures nice imagery and a powerful message alongside, what more could a poet aspire too, well done.
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