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Who Are You

All of sudden I really feel lost… I remember To Me I was my own boss… Sooo confused… Knowing this can no longer be excused… Just trying to figure out_ How, Where and When all this was caused… This can no longer be Paused… Don’t get it Wrong_ with my life I AM happy… Yes of Course! There are times I am feeling crappy… Just feeling something is missing… Something tells me _To Myself I keep dissing… My conscious saying_To Me you are Not fooling… _You somehow let go of your Own Ruling… _It’s time to stop what’s fueling with your heart… _Let Go of what is breaking apart… Finding bits of pieces of what might be disrupting… But how to fix IT without corrupting?… Worrying Myself!! Of what others would think… Blocking my true feelings for our relationship won’t UnLink… You’re asking me Now_“WHO ARE YOU?” _“WHAT'S MAKING YOU FEEL BLUE?” Just say_ I feel New and True… So Please ALL continue listening… For this is Just the beginning… Of my future Poems_ “Of WHO is the True Me”_ you will See Glistening!!!

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Date: 5/27/2015 6:36:00 PM
Jasmin, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/27/2015 5:06:00 PM
Jasmin, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/27/2015 6:46:00 AM
excellent piece. returning after a while to read such a refreshing package full of familiar emotions to the mind is simply blissful. A wonderful and commanding 7 here. Keep on writing.
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Date: 5/27/2015 4:19:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Jasmin :) - Most arts demands training (we learn from each other), for me it is important to share and delight others - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us - I wish you good luck: ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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