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Who are you to tell me what I should feel feel positive you say Why should I feel positive My daughter died why should I feel happy am I not entitled to my pain you yuppy's with demented thoughts play at beings kings of love let me feel what I feel I have a right to feel my pain my tears and broken dreams Yet there are days where I feel happy days where I would have the world sing with me The road of life is full of bumps and hurdles Today I'll smile but yesterday I cried.

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Date: 6/10/2014 3:33:00 PM
Bernard, this is deep... CONGRATULATIONS.... You sure slammed the slam.... Hugs... LINDA
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Date: 6/10/2014 8:28:00 AM
I could not imagine how that kind of a loss would feel. If there is ever a time to feel what you felt, that was the time. I'm sorry for your loss, this poem transcends any contest.
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Date: 6/10/2014 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win!
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Date: 6/10/2014 1:02:00 AM
Congratulations on this win. Mohan
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Date: 6/9/2014 8:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win and thanks for supporting my slamming contest… Verlena
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